Wednesday, August 06, 2008

THE COMMUNE Sneak Peek #3

4 comments:

Michael said...

That was another fun snippet, but I was confused about the turkey. That seemed jarring. I sort of miss not knowing the purpose behind that. :>) I still look forward to seeing the whole thing someday in a metroplex!

Ryan Harris said...

Good job, Fies.

Catching up on all the happenings in your life... via blog.

I'll shoot you an email in a bit.

Ryan H.

Brea said...

that would have been creepy if not for the music. the music made it feel kind of compelling and more fast paced than it was -- but i'm taking out of context so perhaps that was the point.

i liked the big screen. very patriarch-seeing-over-his-people-godlike-and-all...

Marty Nozz said...

That did indeed hit the creepy buttons. The music added a pressure to it as if we were on the verge of action, and that transferred well into the tension and pressure that the young lady sitting there watching the screen must have been feeling.

Switching from the 'patriarch' to the turkey at the very end had a snarky little punch to it. I'm taking it as a reveal as to how much truth there was behind the guy's whole message.